A friend of mine pointed out that the second last photo did not have sufficient impact when contrasted with the twist in the last photo. This is probably because the expression on the girl's face is not exaggerated enough. Hence, we are unable to see her satisfaction.
Also, frame 3 seems redundant since it has the same meaning and message as frame 4.
I decided to remove the original frame 3 and include another picture that depicts the complication of the model kit. I think this will increase the amount of build up and expectations so that the final twist will be even more dramatic.
Presenting my final version
(new)
(new)
